Monday, 25 November 2019

Practice 19. My first outline: "Globalization"


Practice 18. Writing thesis statements

GOVERNMENT SURVEILLANCE - PRO

- Reduces crime rates
- Promotes public safety
- It helps to identify criminals


GUN OWNERSHIP - CON

Risk of injuring someone
- Gun licenses are not difficult to get so criminals can access to weapons easily
- It doesn't really increase security.


GLOBALIZATION - PRO

- You are informed no matter where you are
- You can travel wherever you want
- You can buy products all over the world


CHANGING YOUR NAME - CON

- I love my name
- People can get confused
- You need to change your ID


INMIGRATION - PRO

- Learn other cultures
- Learn other languages
- They provide more money to the country


ANIMAL CIRCUSES - CON

- Many animals suffer while training
- They separate animals from their natural habitat
- Animals act against their nature practicing that kind of exercises.


THESIS STATEMENTS


- I think that Government surveillance can be good as it reduces crime rates, it promotes public safe and it helps to identify criminals.

- I think that Gun ownership shouldn't be allowed since it increase the risk of injuring someone, gun licenses are not difficult to get so criminal can access to weapons easily and it does'nt really increase security.

- I think that Globalization is very beneficial since you are informed no matter where you are, you can travel wherever you want and you can buy products all over the world.

- I think that Changing my name would be something I wouldn’t like since I love my name, people can get confused and you need also to change you ID.

- I think that Immigration is very beneficial since you can learn different languages, new cultures and they provide more money to the country.


- I think that Animal circuses should not be permitted since many animals suffer while training, they separate animals from their natural habitat and animal act against their nature practicing that kind of exercises.